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Broken Heart.


When time passes by
I can still hear my words
I told you goodbye

When that time has passed
I realised that I broke you
Something that isn't repaired easily

Everytime I think of you
I remember it
I have really broken you

Yet this isn't the end
I want you to go on
Never stop trying

I may have left you
Still I won't walk away
Because I don't dislike you

Keep living, keep hope
You will survive
Not everything will come at once

Everytime you think of me
I hope I won't hurt you anymore
It's my last wish for you
©2008-2009 ~Yami-Tsuki-chan
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:icontownuri:
I really like it. With simple words and sentences, you carried real feelings into the poem. You proved that breaking up can be hard for both.

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While I'm staring at the roses, the melody of death flows
:iconyami-tsuki-chan:
:D Thank you very much!! >w<

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"Whenever you think it's over..."
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:icondarlingangel0565:
You did a great job portraying so much feeling and emotion in this poem.

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:icontsukibana-yamai:
Beautiful. both the poem and the illustration!

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